Hmm... I want to mention liking the last line, but it seems everyone else has commented on it. ^_^"
I think the horse looks nice. ^_^ ...now that I think about it, especially with the different angles, it looks really good. But, I guess when you have trouble with something for years, you'll keep your weak points in mind and end up drawing whatever it is better than you would have if you didn't have trouble with it. (well... either that or over-compensate. When I start drawing fanart for a new series (well, new in terms of me drawing art for it), I can tell myself stuff like, 'his nose is longer than you want to draw it', and then when I start getting used to drawing his nose, I can end up drawing it larger than it really is because I've gotten more used to drawing it longer. That's what I told myself when I started drawing Edward from Fullmetal Alchemist, because I was used to drawing short noses from some earlier animes. And now I've started drawing some Disney fanart, and I keep telling myself that things are more exaggerated and lines are curvier than I want to make them.)
Altai I was born there